--- archlinux.7.orig.txt	2012-11-05 16:22:00.428672846 -0500
+++ archlinux.7.txt	2012-11-05 17:15:28.294816724 -0500
@@ -12,69 +12,79 @@
 --------
 Overview of the basic configuration of Arch Linux.
 
 DESCRIPTION
 -----------
-Arch Linux exposes the user to the system without hiding any details. This manpage gives a
-brief overview of the configuration files that should be set up on a fresh install.
+Arch Linux exposes the user to the system without hiding any details.
+This man page gives a brief overview of the configuration files that should be set up on a fresh install.
 
 SYSTEM SERVICES[[S]]
 --------------------
-System services to be started at boot can be enabled using 'systemctl enable <name>.service'. To view
-available services use 'systemctl list-unit-files'.
+System services to be started at boot can be enabled using 'systemctl enable <name>'.
+To view available services, use 'systemctl list-unit-files'.
 
 HOSTNAME[[H]]
 -------------
-The hostname of the machine can be set using 'hostnamectl set-hostname <hostname>'. It will then be
-written to /etc/hostname.
+The hostname of the machine can be set using 'hostnamectl set-hostname <hostname>'.
+It will then be written to /etc/hostname.
 
 LOCALIZATION[[L]]
 -----------------
-Various locales may be enabled in /etc/locale.gen, and generated by locale-gen. The system-wide locale to be used
-can be configured in /etc/locale.conf. These settings can be overridden on a per-user basis by keeping a
-user-specific locale.conf in $HOME/.config/locale.conf. The user-specific file will take precedence if it exists.
+Various locales may be enabled in /etc/locale.gen and are generated by 'locale-gen'.
+The system-wide locale to be used can be configured in /etc/locale.conf.
+These settings can be overridden on a per-user basis by keeping a user-specific locale.conf in $HOME/.config/locale.conf.
+The user-specific file will take precedence if it exists.
 
 VIRTUAL CONSOLE[[V]]
 --------------------
-The virtual console is configured in /etc/vconsole.conf. It allows you to set a font and a keyboard layout, among
-other things. Note that these settings only apply to the console, and not if you use X.
+The virtual console is configured in /etc/vconsole.conf.
+It allows you to set a font and a keyboard layout, among other things.
+Note that these settings only apply to the console and do not apply if you use X.
 
 TIME[[T]]
 ---------
-The local timezone is configured by calling 'timedatectl set-timezone <Region/City>'. A *symlink* is then created
-from /etc/localtime to the correct zoneinfo file under /usr/share/zoneinfo/. E.g.,
+The local time zone is configured by calling 'timedatectl set-timezone <Region/City>'.
+A relative *symlink* is then created from /etc/localtime to the correct zoneinfo file under /usr/share/zoneinfo/. For example,
 
     /etc/localtime -> ../usr/share/zoneinfo/Europe/Paris
 
 The real-time clock, which keeps track of time when the computer is off, can be configured to either
-be in UTC or in localtime by calling 'timedatectl set-local-rtc <false|true>'. The default is UTC.
+be in UTC or in local time by calling 'timedatectl set-local-rtc <false|true>'.
+The default is UTC.
 
 FILESYSTEMS[[F]]
 ----------------
 Filesystems are configured in /etc/fstab, and encryption mappings are configured in /etc/crypttab.
 
 INITRAMFS[[R]]
 --------------
-The initramfs is generated by mkinitcpio, and can be configured in /etc/mkinitcpio.conf.
+The initramfs is generated by 'mkinitcpio -p <preset>'.
+The default preset is "linux".
+The initramfs can be configured in /etc/mkinitcpio.conf.
 
 PACKAGE MANAGER[[P]]
 --------------------
 The package manager, pacman, is configured in /etc/pacman.conf.
 
 BOOTLOADER[[B]]
 ---------------
-GRUB's configuration is generated from /etc/default/grub by grub-mkconfig. Syslinux is configured in /boot/syslinux/syslinux.cfg
+GRUB's configuration is generated from /etc/default/grub by 'grub-mkconfig -o /boot/grub/grub.cfg'.
+Syslinux is configured in /boot/syslinux/syslinux.cfg.
 
 MODULES[[M]]
 ------------
-Most modules should be loaded on-demand. Modules to be unconditionally loaded at boot can be specified in /etc/modules-load.d/,
-and modules to be blacklisted from auto-loading can be configured in /etc/modprobe.d/.
+Most modules should be loaded on-demand.
+Modules to be unconditionally loaded at boot can be specified in /etc/modules-load.d/,
+and modules to be blacklisted from automatically loading can be configured in /etc/modprobe.d/.
 
 SEE ALSO
 --------
 
-systemctl(1), hostnamectl(1), hostname(5), locale.conf(5), vconsole.conf(5), timedatectl(1), timezone(3), hwclock(8), fstab(5),
-crypttab(5), mkinitcpio(8), pacman(8), pacman.conf(5), grub-mkconfig(8), syslinux(1), modules-load.d(5), modprobe.d(5)
+*systemctl*(1), *hostnamectl*(1), *hostname*(5), *locale.conf*(5),
+*vconsole.conf*(5), *timedatectl*(1), *timezone*(3), *hwclock*(8),
+*fstab*(5), *crypttab*(5), *mkinitcpio*(8), *pacman*(8), *pacman.conf*(5),
+*grub-mkconfig*(8), *syslinux*(1), *modules-load.d*(5), *modprobe.d*(5),
+*systemd*(1)
 
 AUTHORS
 -------
 Written by Tom Gundersen.
