24 Aug
2008
24 Aug
'08
3:05 p.m.
On Sun, Aug 24, 2008 at 4:45 PM, Allan McRae <allan@archlinux.org> wrote:
Slight changes here. I don't like "instances of" as that implies there can be multiple occurrences of each. Also a tidy up of the grammar at the end. I would prefer not to use "If present" twice as it does not read well, but can not think of a better way at this time of night...
If present, %u will be replaced with the download URL. Otherwise, the download URL will be placed on the end of the command. If present, %o will be replaced with the local filename, plus a ".part" extension, which allows makepkg to handle resuming file downloads.
Thanks, I applied your corrections. I agree that "if present" twice is not so smooth but well... Not a big deal.