[arch-dev-public] News draft: Manual pages indexing service

[Sven-Hendrik Haase]

On 13.01.21 00:16, Morten Linderud via arch-dev-public wrote:
> On Wed, Jan 13, 2021 at 12:12:05AM +0100, Sven-Hendrik Haase via arch-dev-public wrote:
>> While there are other man page indexing sites out there, it is our hope that
>> publishing man pages that match the version of our released packages makes
>> Arch more accessible and that it improves our documentation even further.
> 
> I would suggest
> 
> "..makes Arch more accessible and improves our documentation even furhter."
> 
> Isn't "that it" redundant here?
> 
> Nice work! Thanks again for fixing this :)<3
> 

How about:
While there are other man page indexing sites out there, it is our hope 
that publishing man pages matching the versions of our released packages 
further improves Arch accessibility and documentation.

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