Re: [pacman-dev] [PATCH] Fix minor grammatical issues in doc/index.txt

On 01/11/13 07:53, Jason St. John wrote:

Signed-off-by: Jason St. John --- doc/index.txt | 16 ++++++++-------- 1 file changed, 8 insertions(+), 8 deletions(-)

diff --git a/doc/index.txt b/doc/index.txt index 9916eab..02da213 100644 --- a/doc/index.txt +++ b/doc/index.txt @@ -21,22 +21,22 @@ option) with a master server through the use of package databases. Prior to this, packages would have to be installed manually using the '\--add' and '\--upgrade' operations.

-Version 3.0 was the switch to a two-part pacman- a backend named libalpm -(library for Arch Linux Package Management), and the familiar pacman frontend. +Version 3.0 was the switch to a two-part pacman- a back-end named libalpm

there should be a space between "pacman" and "-"

+(library for Arch Linux Package Management), and the familiar pacman front-end. Speed in many cases was improved, along with dependency and conflict resolution being able to handle a much wider variety of cases. The switch to a library-based program should also make it easier in the future to develop alternative front ends.

Version 4.0 added package signing and verification capabilities to the entire -makepkg/repo-add/pacman toolchain via GNUPG and GPGME. +makepkg/repo-add/pacman toolchain via GnuPG and GPGME.

Documentation -------------

-Manpages +Man Pages ~~~~~~~~ -There are several manpages available for the programs, utilities, and +There are several man pages available for the programs, utilities, and configuration files dealing with pacman.

* linkman:PKGBUILD[5] @@ -50,7 +50,7 @@ configuration files dealing with pacman. * linkman:repo-add[8] * linkman:vercmp[8]

-Changelog +Change Log

I think this should stay one word. And I am going to cite wikipedia as the definitive reference! http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Changelog

~~~~~~~~~ For a good idea of what is going on in pacman development, take a look at the link:https://projects.archlinux.org/pacman.git/[Git summary page] for the @@ -194,7 +194,7 @@ link:https://mailman.archlinux.org/pipermail/pacman-dev/[view the archives].

Source Code ~~~~~~~~~~~ -Development of pacman is currently done in GIT. The central repository is +Development of pacman is currently done in Git. The central repository is hosted by Arch Linux, although some of the developers have their own trees (ask on the above mailing lists if you are interested in finding the locations of these trees). @@ -238,7 +238,7 @@ Bugs ---- If you find bugs (which is quite likely), please email them to the pacman-dev mailing last at mailto:pacman-dev@archlinux.org[] with specific information -such as your commandline, the nature of the bug, and even the package database +such as your command-line, the nature of the bug, and even the package database if it helps.

You can also post a bug to the Arch Linux bug tracker