[arch-dev-public] [review] News item for tiacx driver - Take #2

[Aaron Griffin]

On Wed, Mar 5, 2008 at 5:13 PM, Tom K <tom at archlinux.org> wrote:
> Aaron Griffin wrote:
>  > On Feb 18, 2008 5:35 PM, Tom K <tom at archlinux.org> wrote:
>  >> =============
>  >>
>  >> The tiacx wireless driver package for the Texas Instruments
>  >> ACX100/ACX111 chipsets has now been moved from the Unstable repository
>  >> to the Core repository. This change means that it will also be included
>  >> in our install isos.
>  >>
>  >> =============
>  >
>  > Sounds fine. Danke.
>  >
>  >
>
>  Difficulties with the associated firmware package have delayed this, and
>  a new wording is now required. Please review and approve:
>
>  ====================
>
>  The tiacx wireless driver package for Texas Instruments
>  ACX100/ACX111 chipsets is moving to the Core repository, and will
>  therefore be included in future install isos. The packages will be in
>  the Testing repository initially, in line with our normal sign-off
>  procedure.
>
>  Current tiacx users will notice an important change in the associated
>  firmware package. Full details are provided in the post-install message.
>
>  ====================

Looks good from here. Maybe "important change" could be switched to
something like "additional steps" or something, if the end users need
to actually do something (didn't look at the actual message)