[arch-dev-public] [review] News item for tiacx driver - Take #2

[Tom K]

Aaron Griffin wrote:
> On Wed, Mar 5, 2008 at 5:13 PM, Tom K <tom at archlinux.org> wrote:
>> Aaron Griffin wrote:
>>  > On Feb 18, 2008 5:35 PM, Tom K <tom at archlinux.org> wrote:
>>  >> =============
>>  >>
>>  >> The tiacx wireless driver package for the Texas Instruments
>>  >> ACX100/ACX111 chipsets has now been moved from the Unstable repository
>>  >> to the Core repository. This change means that it will also be included
>>  >> in our install isos.
>>  >>
>>  >> =============
>>  >
>>  > Sounds fine. Danke.
>>  >
>>  >
>>
>>  Difficulties with the associated firmware package have delayed this, and
>>  a new wording is now required. Please review and approve:
>>
>>  ====================
>>
>>  The tiacx wireless driver package for Texas Instruments
>>  ACX100/ACX111 chipsets is moving to the Core repository, and will
>>  therefore be included in future install isos. The packages will be in
>>  the Testing repository initially, in line with our normal sign-off
>>  procedure.
>>
>>  Current tiacx users will notice an important change in the associated
>>  firmware package. Full details are provided in the post-install message.
>>
>>  ====================
> 
> Looks good from here. Maybe "important change" could be switched to
> something like "additional steps" or something, if the end users need
> to actually do something (didn't look at the actual message)
> 
> 

Agreed - how about

"Current users will require some additional steps when installing the 
associated firmware package."