[arch-projects] [initscripts] [PATCH 1/2] Correct spelling and grammar in comments, messages, and man pages
jstjohn at purdue.edu
jstjohn at purdue.edu
Wed Jun 20 18:35:54 EDT 2012
From: "Jason St. John" <jstjohn at purdue.edu>
This commit improves/corrects the spelling and grammar in script
comments, messages that get printed to the terminal (stat_busy, etc.),
and in two man pages.
Some of the notable changes are listed below:
-- 'UDev' -> 'udev'
-- 'filesystems' -> 'file systems'
-- 'BTRFS' -> 'Btrfs'
-- 'api' -> 'API'
-- 'timezone' -> 'time zone'
-- 'http://' -> 'https://' (in the archlinux.org URL)
-- 'bash' -> 'Bash' (although obviously not in the shebang)
-- 'startup' -> 'start-up'
-- changed messages printed to the terminal to use sentence case
exclusively
---
PKGBUILD | 3 +--
bash-completion | 2 +-
functions | 46 +++++++++++++++++++++++-----------------------
netfs | 6 +++---
network | 8 ++++----
rc.conf.5.txt | 44 ++++++++++++++++++++++----------------------
rc.d.8.txt | 6 +++---
rc.local | 2 +-
rc.shutdown | 26 +++++++++++++-------------
rc.single | 4 ++--
rc.sysinit | 50 +++++++++++++++++++++++++-------------------------
11 files changed, 98 insertions(+), 99 deletions(-)
diff --git a/PKGBUILD b/PKGBUILD
index 0c63e59..7a45797 100644
--- a/PKGBUILD
+++ b/PKGBUILD
@@ -3,7 +3,7 @@ pkgver=$(date +%Y%m%d)
pkgrel=$(git log -1 --pretty=format:%h)
pkgdesc="System initialization/bootup scripts"
arch=('any')
-url="http://www.archlinux.org"
+url="https://www.archlinux.org"
license=('GPL')
groups=('base')
conflicts=('initscripts')
@@ -16,7 +16,6 @@ optdepends=('net-tools: legacy networking support'
'bridge-utils: Network bridging support'
'dhcpcd: DHCP network configuration'
'wireless_tools: Wireless networking')
-makedepends=(asciidoc)
source=()
sha256sums=()
diff --git a/bash-completion b/bash-completion
index 4b4593b..333e339 100644
--- a/bash-completion
+++ b/bash-completion
@@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
-# rc.d bash completion by Seblu <seblu at seblu.net>
+# rc.d Bash completion by Seblu <seblu at seblu.net>
_rc_d()
{
diff --git a/functions b/functions
index 4a8ba7b..daf8d83 100644
--- a/functions
+++ b/functions
@@ -2,7 +2,7 @@
# initscripts functions
#
-# sanitize PATH (will be overridden later when /etc/profile is sourced, but is useful for UDev)
+# sanitize PATH (will be overridden later when /etc/profile is sourced but is useful for udev)
export PATH="/usr/local/sbin:/usr/local/bin:/usr/sbin:/usr/bin:/sbin:/bin"
localevars=(LANG LC_CTYPE LC_NUMERIC LC_TIME LC_COLLATE LC_MONETARY
@@ -13,7 +13,7 @@ vconsolevars=(KEYMAP KEYMAP_TOGGLE FONT FONT_MAP FONT_UNIMAP)
if [[ $1 == "start" ]]; then
if [[ $STARTING ]]; then
- echo "A daemon is starting another daemon, this is unlikely to work as intended."
+ echo "A daemon is starting another daemon; this is unlikely to work as intended."
else
export STARTING=1
fi
@@ -334,13 +334,13 @@ kill_all_wait() {
}
kill_all() {
- stat_busy "Sending SIGTERM To Processes"
+ stat_busy "Sending SIGTERM to processes"
kill_all_wait 15 40
if (( $? == 0 )); then
stat_done
else
stat_fail
- status "Sending SIGKILL To Processes" kill_all_wait 9 60
+ status "Sending SIGKILL to processes" kill_all_wait 9 60
fi
}
@@ -358,23 +358,23 @@ load_modules() {
return $rc
}
-# Start/trigger UDev, load MODULES and settle UDev
+# Start/trigger udev, load MODULES and settle udev
udevd_modprobe() {
# $1 = where we are being called from.
# This is used to determine which hooks to run.
- status "Starting UDev Daemon" /usr/lib/systemd/systemd-udevd --daemon
+ status "Starting udev daemon" /usr/lib/systemd/systemd-udevd --daemon
run_hook "$1_udevlaunched"
- stat_busy "Triggering UDev uevents"
+ stat_busy "Triggering udev uevents"
udevadm trigger --action=add --type=subsystems
udevadm trigger --action=add --type=devices
stat_done
# Load modules from the MODULES array and modules-load.d
- status -v "Loading User-specified Modules" load_modules
+ status -v "Loading user-specified modules" load_modules
- status "Waiting for UDev uevents to be processed" \
+ status "Waiting for udev uevents to be processed" \
udevadm settle
run_hook "$1_udevsettled"
@@ -484,13 +484,13 @@ read_crypttab() {
return $failed
}
-set_timezone() {
+set_time_zone() {
local tz=$1 zonefile=/usr/share/zoneinfo/$1
[[ $tz ]] || return 1
if [[ ! -e $zonefile ]]; then
- printf "error: \`%s' is not a valid timezone\n" "$tz"
+ printf "error: \`%s' is not a valid time zone\n" "$tz"
return 1
fi
@@ -501,11 +501,11 @@ set_timezone() {
fi
}
-# Filesystem functions
+# File system functions
# These can be overridden/reused for customizations like shutdown/loop-fsck.
NETFS="nfs,nfs4,smbfs,cifs,codafs,ncpfs,shfs,fuse,fuseblk,glusterfs,davfs,fuse.glusterfs"
-# Check local filesystems
+# Check local file systems
fsck_all() {
if [[ -f /forcefsck ]] || in_array forcefsck $(< /proc/cmdline); then
FORCEFSCK="-f"
@@ -534,12 +534,12 @@ fsck_reboot() {
sleep 15
else
echo
- echo "***************** FILESYSTEM CHECK FAILED ****************"
+ echo "**************** FILE SYSTEM CHECK FAILED ****************"
echo "* *"
echo "* Please repair manually and reboot. Note that the root *"
echo "* file system is currently mounted read-only. To remount *"
- echo "* it read-write type: mount -o remount,rw / *"
- echo "* When you exit the maintenance shell the system will *"
+ echo "* it read-write, type: mount -o remount,rw / *"
+ echo "* When you exit the maintenance shell, the system will *"
echo "* reboot automatically. *"
echo "* *"
echo "************************************************************"
@@ -562,12 +562,12 @@ umount_all() {
findmnt -mrunRo TARGET,FSTYPE,OPTIONS / | {
while read -r target fstype options; do
- # match only targetted fstypes
+ # match only targeted fstypes
if [[ $1 && $1 != "$fstype" ]]; then
continue
fi
- # don't unmount API filesystems
+ # do not unmount API file systems
if [[ $target = /@(proc|sys|run|dev|dev/pts) ]]; then
continue
fi
@@ -589,7 +589,7 @@ umount_all() {
}
remove_leftover() {
- status -v 'Removing Leftover Files' systemd-tmpfiles --create --remove
+ status -v 'Removing leftover files' systemd-tmpfiles --create --remove
}
bootlogd_stop() {
@@ -626,14 +626,14 @@ bootlogd_stop() {
# single_udevlaunched: after udev has been launched in rc.single
# sysinit_udevsettled: after uevents have settled in rc.sysinit
# single_udevsettled: after uevents have settled in rc.single
-# sysinit_premount: before local filesystems are mounted, but after root is mounted read-write in rc.sysinit
-# sysinit_postmount: after local filesystems are mounted
+# sysinit_premount: before local file systems are mounted, but after root is mounted read-write in rc.sysinit
+# sysinit_postmount: after local file systems are mounted
# shutdown_prekillall: before all processes are being killed in rc.shutdown
# single_prekillall: before all processes are being killed in rc.single
# shutdown_postkillall: after all processes have been killed in rc.shutdown
# single_postkillall: after all processes have been killed in rc.single
-# shutdown_preumount: after last filesystem write, but before filesystems are unmounted
-# shutdown_postumount: after filesystems are unmounted
+# shutdown_preumount: after last file system write, but before file systems are unmounted
+# shutdown_postumount: after file systems are unmounted
# shutdown_poweroff: directly before powering off in rc.shutdown
#
# Declare add_hook and run_hook as read-only to prevent overwriting them.
diff --git a/netfs b/netfs
index bd459ef..a3b9ab9 100755
--- a/netfs
+++ b/netfs
@@ -1,12 +1,12 @@
#!/bin/bash
-# sourcing our current rc.conf requires this to be a bash script
+# sourcing our current rc.conf requires this to be a Bash script
. /etc/rc.conf
. /etc/rc.d/functions
case "$1" in
start)
- stat_busy "Mounting Network Filesystems"
+ stat_busy "Mounting network file systems"
mount -a -t "$NETFS"
rc=$?
mount -a -O _netdev
@@ -15,7 +15,7 @@ case "$1" in
stat_done
;;
stop)
- stat_busy "Unmounting Network Filesystems"
+ stat_busy "Unmounting network file systems"
umount -a -f -O _netdev
rc=$?
umount -a -f -t "$NETFS"
diff --git a/network b/network
index 322082c..5fe19e2 100755
--- a/network
+++ b/network
@@ -235,10 +235,10 @@ case "$1" in
# deprecation check
need_legacy && deprecated
if ! ck_daemon network; then
- echo "Network is already running. Try 'network restart'"
+ echo "Network is already running. Try 'network restart'"
exit
fi
- stat_busy "Starting Network"
+ stat_busy "Starting network"
error=0
if need_legacy; then
# bring up bridge interfaces
@@ -271,11 +271,11 @@ case "$1" in
# deprecation check
need_legacy && deprecated
if [[ $NETWORK_PERSIST =~ yes|YES && $RUNLEVEL == [06] ]]; then
- status "Skipping Network Shutdown" true
+ status "Skipping network shutdown" true
exit 0
fi
- stat_busy "Stopping Network"
+ stat_busy "Stopping network"
rm_daemon network
error=0
if need_legacy; then
diff --git a/rc.conf.5.txt b/rc.conf.5.txt
index 726ba23..bfde2e3 100644
--- a/rc.conf.5.txt
+++ b/rc.conf.5.txt
@@ -15,22 +15,22 @@ SYNOPSIS
DESCRIPTION
-----------
The /etc/rc.conf file is the system configuration file for Arch-specific
-settings. The format is bash. It contains several commonly-edited settings such
-as timezone; keymap; kernel modules; daemons to load at start-up; etc. It is
+settings. The format is Bash. It contains several commonly edited settings such
+as time zone, keymap, kernel modules, daemons to load at start-up, etc. It is
split up in a few sections to categorize configuration settings: localization,
-hardware, networking and daemons.
+hardware, networking, and daemons.
LOCALIZATION[[L]]
-----------------
*TIMEZONE=*
-Specifies the timezone. The setting takes effect on boot by ensuring that /etc/localtime is a symlink
-to the correct zoneinfo file. Possible timezones are the relative path to a zoneinfo file starting
-from the directory /usr/share/zoneinfo. For example, a German timezone would be Europe/Berlin,
+Specifies the time zone. The setting takes effect on boot by ensuring that /etc/localtime is a symlink
+to the correct zoneinfo file. Possible time zones are the relative path to a zoneinfo file starting
+from the directory /usr/share/zoneinfo. For example, a German time zone would be Europe/Berlin,
which refers to the file /usr/share/zoneinfo/Europe/Berlin.
-Note: if empty, /etc/localtime is not changed. This is useful if /etc/localtime is maintained manually
-or by a third-party tool; or if there is no reason to change it from what was set during install.
+Note: If empty, /etc/localtime is not changed. This is useful if /etc/localtime is maintained manually
+or by a third-party tool, or if there is no reason to change it from what was set during install.
Default: empty
@@ -43,9 +43,9 @@ Options:
- empty: fall back to the value in /var/lib/hwclock/adjtime, which defaults to UTC. This is recommended
as other users of hwclock might change the adjtime file and hence cause rc.conf and adjtime to be out of sync.
- "UTC": most robust, allows operating systems to abstract local time and ease DST.
- - "localtime": apply timezone (and DST) in hardwareclock: discouraged.
- Choose this if you dualboot with an OS which cannot handle UTC BIOS times correctly, like Windows (note
- that recent Windows'es can use UTC, which is preferable).
+ - "localtime": apply time zone (and DST) in hardwareclock: discouraged.
+ Choose this if you dual-boot with an OS which cannot handle UTC BIOS times correctly, like Windows (note
+ that recent Windows releases can use UTC, which is preferable).
- any other value will result in the hardware clock being left untouched (useful for virtualization)
Default: empty
@@ -87,14 +87,14 @@ Default: empty
*DAEMON_LOCALE=*
- - If set to 'yes', use $LOCALE as the locale during daemon startup and during the boot process.
+ - If set to 'yes', use $LOCALE as the locale during daemon start-up and during the boot process.
- If set to 'no', the C locale is used.
Default: "yes"
*USECOLOR=*
-Use ANSI color sequences in startup messages
+Use ANSI color sequences in start-up messages
Default: "yes"
@@ -109,19 +109,19 @@ Default: ().
*USEDMRAID=*
-Scan for FakeRAID (dmraid) Volumes at startup.
+Scan for FakeRAID (dmraid) volumes at start-up.
Default: "no"
*USEBTRFS=*
-Scan for BTRFS volumes at startup.
+Scan for Btrfs volumes at start-up.
Default: "no"
*USELVM=*
-Scan for LVM volume groups at startup, required if you use LVM.
+Scan for LVM volume groups at start-up. This is required if you use LVM.
Default: "no"
@@ -138,7 +138,7 @@ The following settings help you setting up a wired network.
*interface=*
-Name of device. Use 'ip addr' or 'ls /sys/class/net/' to see all available interfaces.
+Name of device. Use `ip addr` or `ls /sys/class/net/` to see all available interfaces.
Default: empty
@@ -191,7 +191,7 @@ Required for manual configuration, ignored for DHCP.
netmask=
gateway=
-The following options might be needed for advanced use-cases.
+The following options might be needed for advanced use cases.
*NETWORK_PERSIST=*
@@ -201,7 +201,7 @@ Default: "no"
*NETWORKS=*
-This functionality is deprecated, please refer to the 'netcfg' documentation.
+This functionality is deprecated; please refer to 'man 8 netcfg'.
DAEMONS[[D]]
------------
@@ -212,10 +212,10 @@ Daemons to start at boot-up (in this order)
- prefix a daemon with a @ to start it up in the background
If you are sure nothing else touches your hardware clock (such as ntpd or
-a dual-boot), you might want to enable 'hwclock'. Note that this will only
+dual-booting), you might want to enable 'hwclock'. Note that this will only
make a difference if the hwclock program has been calibrated correctly.
-If you use a network filesystem you should enable 'netfs'.
+If you use a network file system, you should enable 'netfs'.
Default: (syslog-ng network crond)
@@ -226,4 +226,4 @@ hostname(5), vconsole.conf(5), locale.conf(5), hwclock(8)
AUTHORS
-------
-Written by Dieter Plaetinck, Tom Gundersen and others.
+Written by Dieter Plaetinck, Tom Gundersen, and others.
diff --git a/rc.d.8.txt b/rc.d.8.txt
index d0bbcce..c648e29 100644
--- a/rc.d.8.txt
+++ b/rc.d.8.txt
@@ -25,7 +25,7 @@ The actions supported by a rc scripts may be different from script to script, bu
commonly supported actions include:
*start*::
- Starts the script if it's not already running.
+ Starts the script if it is not already running.
*stop*::
Stops a running script.
@@ -73,13 +73,13 @@ Examples[[E]]
Starts *sshd* and *gpm* scripts.
*rc.d start --auto --stopped*::
- Starts all stopped scripts which are started at startup.
+ Starts all stopped scripts which are started at start-up.
*rc.d stop crond*::
Stops the *crond* script.
*rc.d stop --noauto*::
- Stop all script which are not runned at startup
+ Stops all scripts which are not started at start-up
*rc.d restart crond*::
Restarts the *crond* script.
diff --git a/rc.local b/rc.local
index 4950cba..21254f1 100755
--- a/rc.local
+++ b/rc.local
@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
#!/bin/bash
#
-# /etc/rc.local: Local multi-user startup script.
+# /etc/rc.local: Local multi-user start-up script.
#
diff --git a/rc.shutdown b/rc.shutdown
index c708b92..36ce5bd 100755
--- a/rc.shutdown
+++ b/rc.shutdown
@@ -10,7 +10,7 @@
stty onlcr
echo " "
-printhl "Initiating Shutdown..."
+printhl "Initiating shutdown..."
echo " "
run_hook shutdown_start
@@ -19,19 +19,19 @@ run_hook shutdown_start
stop_all_daemons
-status 'Saving Random Seed' /usr/lib/systemd/systemd-random-seed save
+status 'Saving random seed' /usr/lib/systemd/systemd-random-seed save
-[[ $TIMEZONE ]] && status "Configuring Time Zone" set_timezone "$TIMEZONE"
+[[ $TIMEZONE ]] && status "Configuring time zone" set_time_zone "$TIMEZONE"
# Write to wtmp file before unmounting
halt -w
-# stop monitoring of lvm2 groups before unmounting filesystems
+# stop monitoring of LVM2 groups before unmounting file systems
[[ $USELVM = [Yy][Ee][Ss] && -x $(type -P lvm) ]] &&
status "Deactivating monitoring of LVM2 groups" vgchange --monitor n
# any future uevents can and should be ignored
-status "Shutting down UDev" udevadm control --exit
+status "Shutting down udev" udevadm control --exit
run_hook shutdown_prekillall
@@ -41,15 +41,15 @@ run_hook shutdown_postkillall
run_hook shutdown_preumount
-# unmount any non-api partitions that are backed by swap, we don't want to
+# Unmount any non-API partitions that are backed by swap; we don't want to
# move their contents into memory (waste of time and might caues OOM).
-status "Unmounting Swap-backed Filesystems" umount_all "tmpfs"
+status "Unmounting swap-backed file systems" umount_all "tmpfs"
# almost everything is dead now, so the swap should hopefully be relatively
# empty, and quick to switch off
-status "Deactivating Swap" swapoff -a
+status "Deactivating swap" swapoff -a
-status "Unmounting Non-API Filesystems" umount_all
+status "Unmounting non-API file systems" umount_all
run_hook shutdown_postumount
@@ -90,14 +90,14 @@ if [[ -x /run/initramfs/shutdown ]]; then
fi
fi
- # make /run/initrafs a mount
+ # make /run/initramfs a mount
mount --bind /run/initramfs /run/initramfs
# in case someone has shared our mountpoints, unshare them
mount --make-private /run/initramfs
mount --make-private /
- # bind all api mounts
+ # bind all API mounts
mkdir -p /run/initramfs/{sys,proc,dev,run,oldroot}
mount --bind /sys /run/initramfs/sys
mount --bind /proc /run/initramfs/proc
@@ -108,7 +108,7 @@ if [[ -x /run/initramfs/shutdown ]]; then
cd /run/initramfs
pivot_root . oldroot
- #reexec init
+ # reexec init
/oldroot/sbin/init u
# run /shutdown in the new root
@@ -116,7 +116,7 @@ if [[ -x /run/initramfs/shutdown ]]; then
else
- status "Remounting Root Filesystem Read-only" \
+ status "Remounting root file system read-only" \
mount -o remount,ro /
# Power off or reboot
diff --git a/rc.single b/rc.single
index aec026c..32bbcd8 100755
--- a/rc.single
+++ b/rc.single
@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
#!/bin/bash
#
-# /etc/rc.single: Single-user startup script.
+# /etc/rc.single: Single-user start-up script.
#
. /etc/rc.conf
@@ -18,7 +18,7 @@ if [[ $PREVLEVEL != N ]]; then
run_hook single_postkillall
- # Start/trigger UDev, load MODULES and settle UDev
+ # Start/trigger udev, load MODULES and settle udev
udevd_modprobe single
# Removing leftover files
diff --git a/rc.sysinit b/rc.sysinit
index 71eea91..8a4605c 100755
--- a/rc.sysinit
+++ b/rc.sysinit
@@ -8,10 +8,10 @@
echo " "
printhl "Arch Linux\n"
-printhl "${C_H2}http://www.archlinux.org"
+printhl "${C_H2}https://www.archlinux.org"
printsep
-# mount the api filesystems
+# mount the API file systems
# /proc, /sys, /run, /dev, /run/lock, /dev/pts, /dev/shm
mountpoint -q /proc || mount -t proc proc /proc -o nosuid,noexec,nodev
mountpoint -q /sys || mount -t sysfs sys /sys -o nosuid,noexec,nodev
@@ -30,7 +30,7 @@ if [[ ! -e /run/initramfs/root-fsck ]]; then
# remount root ro to allow for fsck later on, we remount now to
# make sure nothing can open files rw on root which would block a remount
findmnt / --options ro &>/dev/null ||
- status "Mounting Root Read-Only" mount -o remount,ro /
+ status "Mounting root read-only" mount -o remount,ro /
fi
run_hook sysinit_start
@@ -47,14 +47,14 @@ case $HARDWARECLOCK in
esac
if [[ $HWCLOCK_PARAMS ]]; then
- stat_busy "Adjusting system time and setting kernel timezone"
+ stat_busy "Adjusting system time and setting kernel time zone"
- # Adjust the system time for timezone offset if rtc is not in UTC
+ # Adjust the system time for time zone offset if rtc is not in UTC
# 1. Make creation time on device nodes sane (FS#8665)
- # 2. Filesystem checks can depend on system time
+ # 2. File system checks can depend on system time
# 3. This also sets the kernel time zone, used by e.g. vfat
- # If TIMEZONE is not set in rc.conf, the timezone stored in /etc/localtime
- # is used. If HARDWARECLOCK is not set in rc.conf, the value in
+ # If TIMEZONE is not set in /etc/rc.conf, the time zone stored in /etc/localtime
+ # is used. If HARDWARECLOCK is not set in /etc/rc.conf, the value in
# /var/lib/hwclock/adjfile is used (in this case /var can not be a separate
# partition).
[[ $TIMEZONE ]] && export TZ=$TIMEZONE
@@ -62,7 +62,7 @@ if [[ $HWCLOCK_PARAMS ]]; then
unset TZ
fi
-# Start/trigger UDev, load MODULES and settle UDev
+# Start/trigger udev, load MODULES, and settle udev
udevd_modprobe sysinit
if [[ -s /etc/locale.conf ]]; then
@@ -70,9 +70,9 @@ if [[ -s /etc/locale.conf ]]; then
[[ $LANG ]] && LOCALE=$LANG
fi
-status 'Configuring Virtual Consoles' /usr/lib/systemd/systemd-vconsole-setup
+status 'Configuring virtual consoles' /usr/lib/systemd/systemd-vconsole-setup
-# bring up the loopback interface
+# Bring up the loopback interface
[[ -d /sys/class/net/lo ]] &&
status "Bringing up loopback interface" ip link set up dev lo
@@ -80,11 +80,11 @@ status 'Configuring Virtual Consoles' /usr/lib/systemd/systemd-vconsole-setup
[[ $USEDMRAID = [Yy][Ee][Ss] && -x $(type -P dmraid) ]] &&
status "Activating FakeRAID arrays" dmraid -i -ay
-# BTRFS devices detection
+# Btrfs devices detection
[[ $USEBTRFS = [Yy][Ee][Ss] && -x $(type -P btrfs) ]] &&
- status "Activating BTRFS volumes" btrfs device scan
+ status "Activating Btrfs volumes" btrfs device scan
-# Activate LVM2 groups if any
+# Activate LVM2 groups, if any
activate_vgs
# Set up non-root encrypted partition mappings
@@ -96,10 +96,10 @@ if [[ -f /etc/crypttab ]] && type -p cryptsetup >/dev/null; then
(( crypto_unlocked )) && activate_vgs
fi
-# Check filesystems
+# Check file systems
run_hook sysinit_prefsck
if [[ -x $(type -P fsck) ]]; then
- stat_busy "Checking Filesystems"
+ stat_busy "Checking file systems"
fsck_all >|"${FSCK_OUT:-/dev/stdout}" 2>|"${FSCK_ERR:-/dev/stdout}"
declare -r fsckret=$?
(( fsckret <= 1 )) && stat_done || stat_fail
@@ -111,25 +111,25 @@ run_hook sysinit_postfsck
# Single-user login and/or automatic reboot if needed
fsck_reboot $fsckret
-status "Remounting Root and API filesystems" \
+status "Remounting root and API file systems" \
/usr/lib/systemd/systemd-remount-fs
-# now mount all the local filesystems
+# now mount all the local file systems
run_hook sysinit_premount
-status "Mounting Local Filesystems" \
+status "Mounting local file systems" \
mount_all
run_hook sysinit_postmount
-# enable monitoring of lvm2 groups, now that the filesystems are mounted rw
+# Enable monitoring of LVM2 groups, now that the file systems are mounted rw
[[ $USELVM = [Yy][Ee][Ss] && -x $(type -P lvm) && -d /sys/block ]] &&
status "Activating monitoring of LVM2 groups" \
vgchange --monitor y >/dev/null
-status "Activating Swap" swapon -a
+status "Activating swap" swapon -a
-[[ $TIMEZONE ]] && status "Configuring Time Zone" set_timezone "$TIMEZONE"
+[[ $TIMEZONE ]] && status "Configuring time zone" set_time_zone "$TIMEZONE"
-status 'Initializing Random Seed' /usr/lib/systemd/systemd-random-seed load
+status 'Initializing random seed' /usr/lib/systemd/systemd-random-seed load
# Remove leftover files
remove_leftover
@@ -138,11 +138,11 @@ if [[ -s /etc/hostname ]]; then
HOSTNAME=$(< /etc/hostname)
fi
if [[ $HOSTNAME ]]; then
- stat_busy "Setting Hostname: $HOSTNAME"
+ stat_busy "Setting hostname: $HOSTNAME"
echo "$HOSTNAME" >| /proc/sys/kernel/hostname && stat_done || stat_fail
fi
-stat_busy "Saving dmesg Log"
+stat_busy "Saving dmesg log"
if [[ -e /proc/sys/kernel/dmesg_restrict ]] &&
(( $(< /proc/sys/kernel/dmesg_restrict) == 1 )); then
install -Tm 0600 <( dmesg ) /var/log/dmesg.log
--
1.7.11
More information about the arch-projects
mailing list