[pacman-dev] [PATCH] makepkg : allow to specify a download filename

[Xavier]

On Sun, Aug 24, 2008 at 4:45 PM, Allan McRae <allan at archlinux.org> wrote:
>
> Slight changes here.  I don't like "instances of" as that implies there can
> be multiple occurrences of each.  Also a tidy up of the grammar at the end.
>  I would prefer not to use "If present" twice as it does not read well, but
> can not think of a better way at this time of night...
>
>   If present, %u will be replaced with the download URL. Otherwise, the
> download URL will be placed on the end of the command. If present, %o will
> be replaced with the local filename, plus a ".part" extension, which allows
> makepkg to handle resuming file downloads.
>

Thanks, I applied your corrections.
I agree that "if present" twice is not so smooth but well... Not a big deal.